Wednesday, November 20, 2013

Learning Goals:
I can…

• plan for revision using RADR
• Revise the Beginning, Middle and End of a personal narrative essay

Article of the Week Due Friday

Work Check:

• SpringBoard: Pages 31-32, 34-37
• Class Journal: Practice Revision of Beginning, Middle and End

Opening:

1. Review Essays C and D - which is better?  Why?

2. Discuss pages 40-41

• Add "Writing Process" to the Rubric on page 41.

3. In your Revision Groups:

• Finish sharing drafts (if you weren't finished)
• Share "Plan for Revision" on handout
• Review your plan and make sure your group members think your plan is sound.

Work Period:

4. Use the rest of the class period to make revision notes on your draft.

5. Once your revision notes are complete - RADR - Rewrite your Personal Narrative Essay.

Closing:

6. Full Revision due when you come to class tomorrow.