Thursday, November 21, 2013

Learning Goals:
I can….

• Edit a draft for accurate conventions and use of language
• prepare a legible draft that communicates a significant choice in my life

Article of the Week due Tomorrow

Opening:

1. Read two other sample narratives

• What details do these writers both include?  Why?
• What makes each Reflective Ending powerful?

2. Read through your draft one more time, circling any words or phrases that don't "Sound Right"

3. Correct any sentences that don't sound right - try out sentences on your group members and Mr. Busse

Work Period:

4. Share your draft with your partners.  Have a "reader" read it out loud, while you all look on the draft.  

5. Discuss and share ideas for final revisions and edits.

6. Make the necessary corrections and rewrite the draft if necessary.  

Closing:

7.  Bring in your final draft tomorrow.  Tomorrow you'll have the chance to Reflect on the changes you made throughout the Revision Process.