Friday, February 14, 2014

Learning Objectives:
I can...

• develop a hook and conclusion
• create a conclusion that links all of the ideas together
• revise using RADR strategies
• include transitions for clarity and cohesion

Article of the Week due NOW.

Opening:

1. Discuss RADR:

• Rearrange
• Add
• Delete
• Replace

2. Recall transitions and look to the Writing Workshop Packet, Activity 2 for appropriate transitions and transitional phrases.

• Idea to Idea by combining sentences using FANBOYS
• Sentence to sentence
• Paragraph to Paragraph

Work Period:

3. Review your essay and revise appropriately.

4. Number the order of your paragraphs with internal revisions.

5. Submit your working draft by the end of the period. 

Closing:

7. Reminder: Independent Reading #23 due Monday