Monday, November 11, 2013

Learning Focus:
I can…

• understand the purpose of revision

Opening:

1. Discuss responses to the questions on page 31.

2. Explore the concept of Revision on a Graphic Organizer (see samples) in your Journal

• Word, definition, example, in context, image

Work Period:

3. Look at the quotation at the top of page 32.  

• Respond to the quotation by Naomi Shihab Nye in your journal. 
• Refine your definition on page 32 by adding, deleting, etc.

4. Take Notes on page 32 based on Mr. Busse comments.

5. Write a few "Questions I still have"

6. Summarize what you've learned.

Closing:

7. Class-created Definition of Revision

Homework: Write another personal narrative about a choice (use your list from page 14)